I`m also very interested to try out your game and give you feedback.
My english skills are fine.
My pc-specs:
AMD FX-6300 (Triple-Core)
AMD Radeon R7 265
4 GB Ram
Thank you for your time.
Super wrote:I played a tiny bit of your game and came up with some feedback I hope you find useful. It's in your pm box.
what I will say here is that I am very intrigued by this, and pretty much love it and a lot of your ideas so far.
Didn't get to the superpowers, but will they just be combat related or will there be any field uses? Probably too much to ask for Golden Sun style puzzles so meh
Anyway, English is great, only thing I noticed that might be a problem is that titles should have the first letter of each word capitalized so the Prologue title looks a bit funny at the moment.
Super wrote:Loving so far, only problem is have no idea where to find henchman leader of get money to buy stuff for side quests or even if there's any sex so far or anything more to do
Still, good start
wariotpl wrote:Good game with good graphic, only problems i get in beach, after come from deep ocean i can't do anything and can't exit from beach.
Inthedepths wrote:Looks like a nice game. I'd be happy to check it out and critique your use of the English language. English is my only language.
boyo111 wrote:Did a short first run through, nice idea and the graphics are great, looking forward to more.
Some edit suggestions, not sure if you need to know the location of dialogs:
Sophia in the church scene, Sush my child - Sush should be Shush
Betty - suffering of memory loss - remove the of
Betty - have a short term memory loss - remove the a
Betty - human beings to have ever existed were compatible - remove the to
Betty - henchman is currenty - currently
Not sure about the confidence and morality yet, I hit some increase and decrease and got to the Betty's private item quest where it ended
I don't know how it happened but wandering to the police station I locked the game up, nothing would respond so I had to close it.
FPS was 45 during the prologue
Hope that helps
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