I lost my erection about half way through and I was frantically clicking to see what happens next.
The ending was good ; a departure from your usual style.
There were a few typos here and there, but no worries; it gets the message across.

woody wrote:it will be a sad day when milly is here no more ,though on the bright side kuni is mmm exciting,thnx for another twist in the milly story RKSHOOTER
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