cheese101 wrote:MSK wrote:I got a limerick
On the chest of a barmaid of Yale
were tattooed the prices of ale
and on her behind for the sake of the blind
was the same information in braille
sorry to say,but unfortunately this is no limerick,as limericks have 5 lines,a sample limerick(whilst crap,am not entirely sober whilst writing this) is:
A new farmer's helper named Wull
Accidentally was milking a bull
The farmer said, "Boy yer dumb,
You done milked the wrong one!"
Said the boy, "But me whole bucket's full."
I almost made the same correction. But if you read the third line carefully, it is the 3rd and 4th combined... in other words:
On the chest of a barmaid of Yale
were tattooed the prices of ale
and on her behind
for the sake of the blind
was the same information in braille
It has very good rhythm. I was impressed on second reading.(oh... and MSK... like he said. FIVE lines. 8-) Other than that, bravo)