Well, I just wanted to say "Well done!".
This game really was a nice variation from all those ever same games by some other authors. Maybe not the most innovative or surprising story (to be honest, after seeing Adisa for the first time the rest of the game was predictable), but I really enjoyed the way to the ending. Also great congrats to the nice pictures. Maybe not the best ever seen in games (there has to be a place for improvements ), but i really really appreciate that you take the time to make the pictures on your own. I never liked those pornstar pictures most other authors use and always loved own creations like goblinboys.
However, here are also some comments:
- The game becomes more and more slow towards the end of game or with longer playtime. Especially the skyride within the shopping district took several seconds to load.
- Sometimes you just wander around and search and search. Some of the riddles need to be more.. - don't know how to say - more straight forward or logic or something like this.
- Big breasts are not always the best... more variation in breast size would be appreciated.
- Sometimes when Adisa came to kiss the player (with her open mouth), she didn't look sexy or attractive at all... in fact I found her even repelling. There is much space for improvement in the face design.
But all in all, great work. Keep it up!