chasingdays wrote:i love not knowing what will happen next and it keeps me coming back for more! i can re-read your milly series over and over and it never gets old.
spikerush wrote:I agree with Barnes...
I just do not like any of the decisions you've been making at all. Here is my list of dislikes:
1.) Milly's hair keeps getting shorter. Her hair now looks like a boy's, which is not at all sexy. Will she be bald in another couple of issues?
2.) The whole "I'm saving myself for Ben!" was alright, but then you had him sleeping with everyone, getting Milly's sister pregnant (really?!?!?!?), and now she's just gonna suck/fuck everyone and anyone? Characters are supposed to EVOLVE, not completely go back on everything they believe.
3.) The evil mad scientist plot (injecting Milly's clit with something, drugging and dragging off Ben) is stupid and cheesy.
4.) The English is horrible. Can you not find someone who can write English well to clean it up for you?
5.) Now that I think on it, the entire plot of Milly going away to "learn to better please Ben" is retarded. No female on the face of the planet would be so stupid as to think "Oh, I'm giving head and sleeping with everyone else for Ben's sake!" That is so far removed from logic and reality it would just never happen. Maybe if Milly was addicted to meth or crack she'd think that way.
6.) Pretty much all the characters are idiots. And way too far fetched. You can tell you just took them all way too far without enough thought behind them all. Ben "loves" Milly, Milly "loves" Ben, but they both are sexual with everyone but each other? When I'm in love I don't even think about anyone else that way, at least, when I'm in love the way you try to portray them as being in love. But all the rest of the characters are poorly written as well.
In sum up, you should take a clue from the person who did that 4 part "Photoshoot" series. No stupid convoluted twisting plot, no excessive plot and dialog, just enough to keep interest in them enough to be turned on by the situation.
Oh, yeah... And the girl didn't chop off all her hair and make it look horrible. And he didn't spend 30 some issues building up a sex scene between two of the characters just for it to never happen!
If you want my real opinion...
You should do a total reboot of the series where Milly keeps the sexy long hair she had in the beginning, DOESN'T go off to "whore school", and she and Ben actually hook up with each other instead of saying they love each other and fucking everything else that moves. If you need to inject new characters and situations into the mix, either make side stories, or have Milly and Ben get into a lot of 3 ways.
... Personally, I won't be reading any future issues, if any even happen.
Xyzzy987 wrote:I've been following this thread, but stayed out of the discussion. It's been quiet for a few days, but I kept coming back and rereading the thread over again. It's obviously been bugging me, so I've got to say something. I hope I don't stir it all up again, at least not too much.
4.) The English is horrible. Can you not find someone who can write English well to clean it up for you?
Oh, yeah... And the girl didn't chop off all her hair and make it look horrible. And he didn't spend 30 some issues building up a sex scene between two of the characters just for it to never happen!
Vastroerror wrote:We come to games and stories to escape reality. If this idea of "monkey see" will make "monkey do" then we shouldn't have video games with violence, we shouldn't watch movies that contain violence, and we should all just read Dr. Seuss all day. I think it is responsible to ensure an age limit on access, and not show anything that is clearly violent.
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