Sexy girls from the lagoon great artists

[Loup Garou]

When everything else fails

Would you mind a little editing? Let us hope not. The line "Not even yours Sorceress" would actually read better if you had "Not even yours, Sorceress" The comma sets sorceress aside and tells the reader that that noun is, in fact, a clarification of the pronoun, yours. I know. I know. It is not a big deal but... Hey. I was raised in the forest by a wild English teacher. She taught me how to pickup on stuff like that.

Oh, and a side note... I would have had a line for the girl in the foreground in the last frame as a response to "But... But..." I would have had the girl say something like "Maybe later, right now I am going to concentrate on your pussy."

[Rastifan]

You have a point. Panel 4 reads better like this!



But I think the last panel is fine as it is.

[Loup Garou]

You have a point. Panel 4 reads better like this!



But I think the last panel is fine as it is.

Much better roll to the panel. My suggestion was just my own little joke -- if you had used it I would have been pleased, but not using it is no big deal. 8-)

[Rastifan]

Sheva and Jill teaching Rebecca about bondage

[Rastifan]

Good girl. You made her come.

[Greebo]

Sheva and Jill teaching Rebecca about bondage

i see they go to the Isembard Kingdom Brunel Shop of Bondage Gear!

[Rastifan]

i see they go to the Isembard Kingdom Brunel Shop of Bondage Gear!

LOL

[Vanille]

Epic job Rastifan!

[rkshooter]

Does everyone got thier drinks to toast the New Year!

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Then Bottoms up everyone

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!!!!!!! HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL AT THE LAGOON !!!!!!!! TIME TO PARTY

[Loup Garou]

Bottoms up, indeed. Happy New Year to you as well.

[Rastifan]

See! rkshooter's last panel proves that a man can multitask. Happy new year people

[Squeeky]

See! rkshooter's last panel proves that a man can multitask. Happy new year people

He could if he was quick enough!
What say you DiTo? He'd get left-overs if they were still willing?

[Greebo]

See! rkshooter's last panel proves that a man can multitask.

Don't be so sure, Rastifan! I reckon the reason the man isn't in the picture is that he can't make his mind up -- this is a prime example of Buridan's ass!

(Personally I think I'd head straight for Milly, even though Dr Sucock is rather tempting! But then there's.......)

[Rastifan]

I meant paying attention to 4 things at the same time. And yes, Milly first.

Ps! Actually if I only got Milly, I would still be happy as a fairy.

[Hey Chief]

Rats, I was going to call dibs on her. Oh well let's see whom shall I chose?