by hughx » Thu, 17Feb02 19:12
I like it so far. The models look good, the backgrounds are all great. If I was to be very picky, the perspective or something is off in the Tom & Kelly sex image in the beginning, but everything else look good. I went to each room on the hour and encountered no bugs aside from the day of the week not changing as you mentioned. Each of the options in the rooms passed the amount of time they were labeled with, and the game seemed to function without issue or crashing on Windows 10. I have one issue below, the rest is just English tweaks without changing your intent, hopefully.
Better English "fixes" in keeping with your translated text (in order of appearance):
Tom and Kelly, a couple of young lovers who just finished their studies in university wanted to start a life together.
Everything was so wonderful that one afternoon, Tom brought Kelly to a romantic forest and asked her to marry him.
Despite the surprise, Kelly accepted with some conditions. Before getting married, Tom should have the approval of her family.
KELLY: I see you are a little nervous Tom. Don't worry, everything will be fine. It will only be a few weeks.
TOM: I don't know, I'm not really sure about this.
KELLY: Tom, this is Sarah, my mother. Mom, meet Tom, my boyfriend.
CHOICES-
Formal greeting
Kiss her hand
TOM: Nice to meet you Sarah, now I understand why your daughter is so beautiful.
SARAH: I have to go do some shopping, but I will be back later. Please make yourself comfortable. Kelly will show you around our home.
KELLY: Let me show you my room right now. Then, you'll know where to find me when you want company.
TOM: Kelly, I don't know if this is a good idea. It's a little strange coming into your mother's house and...
KELLY: Calm down, we're alone here, nobody's going to find out. Let me help you relax...
SARAH: WHAT ARE YOU DOING? Get your cock out of my daughter's mouth, right now!
SARA: Kelly, I'm disappointed in you! Coming into my home and fucking like crazy? This is unacceptable, I don't recognize you.
TOM: I hope so. It wasn't the best way to start to get to know each other, her to seeing her daughter giving me a blowjob.
TOM: What can I do now that Sarah dislikes me? I guess I'll start by putting my things in my room and I'll try to be as polite as possible.
CHOICE:
Put the luggage in its place (This is awkward. Try, "Unpack your luggage.")
KELLY: Tom? We're back. Come help with the bags.
KELLY: I talked to my mom about what happened. I think that we should abstain from having sex while we're here, out of respect for her. She hasn't had sex since she divorced my father and we're staying under her roof.
TOM: Well we are going to be married...WAIT! We can't do anything for the simple fact that she doesn't either? Great.
KELLY: For now, that's the way it has to be. I'm sorry. Maybe when she gets to know you better... Look, let's just go to sleep and start over tomorrow.
TOM: (Wow! Kelly's mom has a great body...I better get out of here before she sees me.)
SARAH: How long have you been watching me pervert? Get out of here, right now!
TOM: (Oh, Sarah. I don't know what to say to her.)
SARAH: It's nice to start the morning with a compliment. Thank you, Tom. It's no secret really, I work hard to take care of myself.
TOM: I think you're being modest. I bet you'd look just as fantastic without any effort.
SARAH: That's very flattering, Tom. You're going to make me blush. Enjoy your day.
SARAH: There's the fridge, have whatever you like.
Questionable encounter (maybe a bug of sorts):
At 6:00 if you enter the Kitchen and choose, "take a snack" you get a new picture of Tom drinking the juice and 1 hour passes making it 7:00. This means that Sarah is in the kitchen and you have 2 new choices of dialogue. After choosing, and ending the scene with Sarah, the next image is Tom drinking the juice. I think it should just go back to the Kitchen scene with the Take a snack option. I ate at 6:00 already, but I saw the juice image again. That make sense? I also changed Sarah's response above from "Enjoy your breakfast" to "Enjoy your day." because I may just be entering the kitchen to chat with her and not eat at all.