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GDS wrote:cj1015 wrote:karrek wrote:falcon499 wrote:Nice game so far, shows a lot of potential.
For me when the ToD game starts i'm already in dialogue with loane and once i go back it says 'next round in: -2'![]()
So I'm stuck there and no real round starts. Same for all ?
That's the end of the demo version of the game.
Yup so far...
I think that te dialogue is rushed it needs a little tweaking here and there....
I think also that there needs to be a moral compass that can be degraded or upgraded as you go along.
Rushed how exactly?
Moral compass: Most of your actions can be considered inmoral, like kissing you sister, cock-blocking your friend and so on, so it may be hard n this kind os story,
But the game do keep track of ALL your choices and it lock unlock scenes and routes according, kind of as a moral compass
cj1015 wrote:GDS wrote:cj1015 wrote:karrek wrote:falcon499 wrote:Nice game so far, shows a lot of potential.
For me when the ToD game starts i'm already in dialogue with loane and once i go back it says 'next round in: -2'![]()
So I'm stuck there and no real round starts. Same for all ?
That's the end of the demo version of the game.
Yup so far...
I think that te dialogue is rushed it needs a little tweaking here and there....
I think also that there needs to be a moral compass that can be degraded or upgraded as you go along.
Rushed how exactly?
Moral compass: Most of your actions can be considered inmoral, like kissing you sister, cock-blocking your friend and so on, so it may be hard n this kind os story,
But the game do keep track of ALL your choices and it lock unlock scenes and routes according, kind of as a moral compass
Rushed in you didn't check for typos and didn't really care about your wording.
"You are Tom, a regular guy, living a regular life, you don't have a girlfreind for all that matters. Your parents had a bust, and you are spending time at Susie's house (your older sister), together with Carrie (your younger sister)
Maybe something like this?
You are an average guy, your name is Tom, you live a regular life. You are single not that it's important. Your parents are going through a messy divorce so you are staying clear of the fireworks by living with your older sister Susie. She graciously invited you and your sister to move in while things cool down with your parents.
Today seems like some regular day, or perhaps it's the day of your life the day that everting will just change for you, you can feel it, you just need to get up of your bed and go get it, tiger.
Or you could just oversleep and play Xbox the rest of the day, either way is fine.
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You crack your eyes open perhaps today is a regular day, perhaps its the day that everything in your life will change for you. You just need to get up and get out of bed and seize it. Go get em Tiger!
... Or you could just oversleep and play Xbox the rest of the day, that would be okay too.
The Destiny has spoken! there is nothing you can do about it but to accept it. Time to stay on the bed.
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Destiny has spoken, nothing to do but accept it, you cover your head with your pillow rejecting the day.
cj1015 wrote:Well if you want to send over the scripts... I'll be happy to take a look at them.
GDS wrote:cj1015 wrote:Well if you want to send over the scripts... I'll be happy to take a look at them.
Thanks I will keep your name in mind,
Right now Im still adding text so it's better as soon is finished,
But keep in mind that doing that will be a major spoiler to the game
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