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Tales from the Elsa-Verse: AAA2 released to patrons

Postby tlaero » Sat, 18Mar31 19:47

(This is about stories, not games, but they're stories about my games. So I'm not sure whether or not it's appropriate for this board. Mods, if it's not, I'll remove the thread.)

I've started writing a series of short stories that take place in the "Elsa-verse." They're text-only, so they shouldn't slow down development of our games. They give backstory on old and new characters and events that have happened (or will happen...) in those games. My intent is to release a story to patrons ($1 and up) in the middle of the month and then to the public at the end of the month. It's fun to go back to my roots of writing straight prose without needing to work out dialog choices and alternate paths. And it's nice to be able to write in past tense again, the way god intended...

These stories assume you've played the Elsa-verse games.
Dreaming with Elsa
Redemption for Jessika
Finding Miranda
Saving Chloe

You can find free download links to those games here: https://www.patreon.com/tora
And can play them online here: https://tlaero.newgrounds.com/games/

The Tales from the Elsa-verse stories will likely also intersect with the upcoming "Darkness Falls" episodic game.

I hope you enjoy the my new stories. You can download the current file here:
http://www.mediafire.com/file/yuzbrc2056z4020/Tales.zip

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Re: Tales from the Elsa-Verse: AAA1

Postby tlaero » Sat, 18Mar31 19:54

AAA1: Inseparable released to the public.

This is the first of the "Tales from the Elsa-verse" stories. I have a cameo for a previously unknown character in an upcoming Darkness Falls episode, and Mortze asked me about her. So I wrote this story. (-: Then my mind immediately started swirling with the follow on to it. And, before I knew it, I was committing to doing yet more monthly writing...

Anyway, this story means a lot to me. I hope you like it.
http://www.mediafire.com/file/yuzbrc2056z4020/Tales.zip

Special thanks to Moskys for the Spanish translation.

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Re: Tales from the Elsa-Verse: AAA1

Postby nale » Sat, 18Mar31 21:20

Tlaero, Thank you, really awesome work as always :)
Beautiful story and beautiful written.

However I think you should highlight the Time-jumps more clearly. The stars didn't work clear enough for me especially in the first retrospective - But probably I'm just not observant enough.
Also I'm suprised, that you use this kind of minimalist display technology. I would assume, that PDF's or a more sophisticated web technology would be more easy on the eyes and therefore nicer for the reader.

Please keep it up.
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Re: Tales from the Elsa-Verse: AAA1

Postby tlaero » Sat, 18Apr07 23:29

I just uploaded a French translation done by Marco. Thanks!

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Re: Tales from the Elsa-Verse: AAA2 released to patrons

Postby tlaero » Sun, 18Apr15 17:57

The second installment of Tales from the Elsa-verse -- AAA2: Aftermath -- has released to Patrons ($1/month and higher). I'll release it to the public at the end of the month. The first installment -- AAA1: Inseparable -- is still available with the link on the first page of this thread.

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Re: Tales from the Elsa-Verse: AAA2 released to patrons

Postby Tao Dude » Sun, 18Apr15 22:36

More excellent Storytelling. Fills in the gaps nicely.
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