Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

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Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby fleet » Sun, 18Feb25 22:43

This is a very short visual novel based on a cartoon series I watched a long time ago.
It can be played on Windows, MAC, and Linux systems using any web browser that supports HTML 5 format (converted using techniques described by kexter.
Download the zip file, uncompress it using your favorite file cpmpressor program, and open the index.html file in the web browser of your choice.

Story: Vel and Shag are driving back to their hometown when the check engine on the van comes on. As it is late and no auto repir shop would be open they decide to get separate rooms at a creepy looking hotel.

Playing time is about 15 minutes.

Terms of use: You may not upload this to any web other site without my permission.

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Download from visual Novelty forum -> http://www.visualnovelty.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=8&t=1665
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby HeyChief » Mon, 18Feb26 07:25

Well Fleet, you did it again, a very good story of those we knew so well a long long ago. Thank you
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby fleet » Mon, 18Feb26 19:04

HeyChief wrote:Well Fleet, you did it again, a very good story of those we knew so well a long long ago. Thank you


Thank you for reading it and commenting. [img]images/icones/icon14.gif[/img]

As I've said previously, the only 'payment' I get for making visual novels are comments made and counting number of downloads.
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby Tao Dude » Tue, 18Feb27 00:17

Another excellent effort, fleet. Your work continues to impress.
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby fleet » Tue, 18Feb27 01:30

Tao Dude wrote:Another excellent effort, fleet. Your work continues to impress.


Thank you. [img]images/icones/icon10.gif[/img]
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby ArianeB » Wed, 18Feb28 22:50

Awesome! :lol:
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby fleet » Thu, 18Mar01 02:39

ArianeB wrote:Awesome! :lol:


Thank you very much! [img]images/icones/icon14.gif[/img]
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby tlaero » Sat, 18Mar03 21:46

I just played this and it's really cute. Serious nostalgia for me. I always liked the smart one (Velma) more than the pretty one (Daphne). I thought your modelling for Shaggy was good. Velma was a bit off, but I think you probably did that intentionally to make her more sexy. Not sure that was necessary, but I won't second guess your call there.

I think the text needed a lot more uses of the word "Jinkies." (-: I also wished they called it "The Mystery Machine" instead of "The Van." But I understand that you've got to make sense to people who don't understand the references.

The one substantive bit of feedback I can give is that earlier in the game when you had multiple choices you could try them both. That made me assume that when I got to the main sex scene with 4 or 5 choices I'd get to try them all. When it didn't, I had to decide whether to play the entire game over again to put a save there and see the others. I suggest a quick message on that page that says "You might want to save the game now" or some equivalent.

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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby fleet » Sun, 18Mar04 03:48

tlaero wrote:I just played this and it's really cute. Serious nostalgia for me. I always liked the smart one (Velma) more than the pretty one (Daphne). I thought your modelling for Shaggy was good. Velma was a bit off, but I think you probably did that intentionally to make her more sexy. Not sure that was necessary, but I won't second guess your call there.

I think the text needed a lot more uses of the word "Jinkies." (-: I also wished they called it "The Mystery Machine" instead of "The Van." But I understand that you've got to make sense to people who don't understand the references.

The one substantive bit of feedback I can give is that earlier in the game when you had multiple choices you could try them both. That made me assume that when I got to the main sex scene with 4 or 5 choices I'd get to try them all. When it didn't, I had to decide whether to play the entire game over again to put a save there and see the others. I suggest a quick message on that page that says "You might want to save the game now" or some equivalent.

Tlaero


Thank you for playing and providing feedback. I appreciate both.
Vel was difficult to model, I wanted to get her close to the 'classic' look, but not too close. I tried to do the same for Shag. I didn't want to over-use "Jinkies" or "Zoinks".
I'd rather not put in a "Save the game now" message on that page. However, it should not be difficult to put a 'Go back to main sex scene' button on the "The End" page.
I'll post an update when I make that change.

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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby ArianeB » Sun, 18Mar04 04:03

If you decide later to add another character, you could probably recolor this: https://www.cgbytes.com/store/sku/57926 ... oser-8-Dog
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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby fleet » Sun, 18Mar04 17:49

ArianeB wrote:If you decide later to add another character, you could probably recolor this: https://www.cgbytes.com/store/sku/57926 ... oser-8-Dog


At this point I don't plan to add that particular character to this story.
I don't have the poser8 Dog [img]images/icones/icon11.gif[/img], but I do have the DAZ Millennium Dog LE, which I can recolor if I make a newr story using the characters from this.

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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby tlaero » Sun, 18Mar04 19:15

Yeah, a "Go back to the main sex scene" button at the end would work equally well.

If you do more with these characters, make sure you do a chase scene with them coming and going from various doors on a hallway. And bang on a xylophone to make the run sound. Damn, I miss Scooby Doo.

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Re: Vel and Shag - The Night the Van Broke Down

Postby fleet » Mon, 18Mar05 00:55

I made the "go back button" change suggested by tlaero.

The link to the download host site is in the first post.


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