kaiowas wrote:thx for the reply
I played DWE, RFJ and FM and hoped for more games like that.
I'll try BEW, thx

I wouldn't neglect Tlaero's earlier body of work with Phreaky - the Keely games, Keisha and Christine (my avatar)...you can see the constant improvement in her writing and storytelling throughout

I'm glad you enjoyed the games, Kaiowas.

The first page of this thread has links to the 4 games I did with Phreaky.
viewtopic.php?f=3&t=3663

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Hoboy wrote:

kaiowas wrote:thx for the reply
I played DWE, RFJ and FM and hoped for more games like that.
I'll try BEW, thx

I wouldn't neglect Tlaero's earlier body of work with Phreaky ...

+1. Didn't mean they weren't excellent when I left them out of my response above. I started with Christine and Keisha.

tlaero wrote:I'm glad you enjoyed the games, Kaiowas.

The first page of this thread has links to the 4 games I did with Phreaky.
viewtopic.php?f=3&t=3663

Tlaero

OMG
I so feel like Marc when he entered the Pub across the street and talked to Jess for the first time
I'm never washing my screen again lol, just kidding
thx for the reply ill make sure to check out your other games

kaiowas wrote:OMG
I so feel like Marc when he entered the Pub across the street and talked to Jess for the first time

Humorously, when he did that, there was a poster for Meeting Keeley on the wall. (-:

Tlaero

tlaero wrote:
Humorously, when he did that, there was a poster for Meeting Keeley on the wall. (-:

I did see the poster but it didnt came to mind to do anything with it.
Maybe I missed alot in the game, might have to redo them.

Since there are several chapters now do you have an official name for the universe it's set in, so that we can conveniently save them all in the same folder with it's proper name?

Welcome to the lagoon, Rob, and thanks for asking.

I never named either this universe or the previous one. People tend to call this one the "Elsaverse," and I'm comfortable with that. There characters who are more important than Elsa, and while she's a participant in the overall arc, it's not really about her. But, she was the first introduction to it, and her model is what me stand up and notice Mortze. We've also done more short stories about her than the other characters. So, Elsaverse seems appropriate.

It's kind of like "Game of Thrones." The actual name of that series is "A Song of Ice and Fire," but everyone calls it the name of the first book. I think if I came up with a name for the whole Elsa-Jessika-Miranda series, people would probably still call it the "Elsaverse." And, like I said, I don't have any problem with that. Although, if I were as clever as xCooler2 thought I was, I could have called it "Alpha." (-:

Tlaero

It is just my solution but I put all the "Elsaverse" games in a folder tagged "Tora Games." Since Tora Productions (tlaero and Mortze) has so far only released DwE, RfJ and FM, that puts them all together. When the next one comes out, it will go in there as well.

I find myself using Elsaverse without any hesitation so I do think it is pointless to call it otherwise. It has gained its name by itself.
But for practical reasons I'd create a simple folder called "Tlaero's awesome stuff" where I'd put everything she has provided the community. If you must separate Phreaky's and my stuff then simply use subfolders for that effect.
I, myself, have a folder named "Tlaero's games" where I put all the games done with Phreaky. Not out of direspect for Phreaky, but simply because, at the time, Tlaero's name came first and I didn't know which one did what.

If I must put my stamp on the Elsaverse then consider it done.

Awesome stuff indeed, loved both tlaero's old and new works as well as mortze's solo work, very much looking forward to pandora part 2.

Seems like the general consensus says it's called Elsaverse, so I'll just go with that as well. Thanks for the answers.

Unofficial intro for Elsaverse part 4

Xara says "Thank you, Jessica. Please ready yourself. I may have need of your skill in a moment."

Theresa, the waitress in Delfino, who stand next to table ask "Would you like to see our menu or have something to drink?"
Xara look to her left and answer "A cup of coffee to each of us...and could you bring your maneger with you next time...please?"
Theresa frowns a bit and wonder if she did something wrong "Sure, I'll be back."
She return a few minutes later with coffee and her manager.
He greet then and ask "Is there something wrong?"
"Partly" is Xara's cryptic answer "In less than ten minutes will I...we get company of seven more, so we need a table more chairs here..."
The maneger keep his temper in control "You didn't requi..."
Xara interroupt him "No, that could your waitress deal with...faster! But I want to hire your waitress, Theresa, for rest of the day."
The maneger is taken a little back "But...ehh..."
Xara continue "If you need to call a replacement in, I'll pay for her as well. That should clear any problems about money!"
The maneger find his tongue again "Lady, you don't have to hire her, she is a good waitress and can..."
Xara interroupt him again "It's not her serving skills I need, it's for other reason I need Theresa!"
Jessica, Theresa and the maneger look confused on each other and he ask Theresa "If it's okay with you, Theresa..." she nod "I don't see any problems then." and they move a table closer.
"Good. Theresa, I believe you know Elsa, right?"
She blush a bit "Yes, I...know her...very well."
"Wait for her at reception and then return with her" Xara pause for a moment " and make sure, there's coffee for all."
"I will" and about fem minuter later Theresa return with Elsa and two other women, Jessica don't know either.
After greetings, Xara ask "Miranda, you still didn't find that the blond woman from 'The Old Town Tavern'?"
"No and it's troubling me."
"With your skill in mind...That's not good." Xara says and then she look in Jessica's direction "Jessica, your roommate should be here any time. Could you get her at reception?"
"Of course" and Jessica leave with Theresa.
Miranda then ask "What about the Tadaka sisters? I thought they would be here too?"
"They're still busy with their task." Xara reply, just as Theresa and Jessica return with Sarah, Sylvia and Cynthia in tow.
They all greet each other and sit down.

Xara raise her voice a bit "Some of you allready know me and for the rest...I'm Xara and I'm the leader of Project Phoenix. Some of you have skills above normal like Elsa, who can control dreams...Like Jessica, who can affect people with her singing...And like Miranda, who solving problem unnaturally fast"
Xana wait a moment, before she continue "But I need one more with a special skill...and that's why rest of you are here. I'm in need of time, because a woman's life depend on me...on us."
Miranda mutters "Chloe..." and Elsa follow "Are Miranda right, Xara?"
"An excellent exsample on, how fast Miranda can solve a problem..." is Xara's respond "and yes, it is Chloe...or rather YellowFever..."
"Chloe as Chloe tried to steal from Elsa, she tried to convince Cynthia about her husbond being unfaithful, she tried to keep Marc away from Jessica and two years ago, she did almost...and in some way...killed Miranda!"
Miranda look around "Xara...You have eight women around you and you just reminded or gave at least four of us a reason not to care about Chloe!"
Xara put a tiny smile on "I know and the fighter in me don't care much about Chloe as Chloe, but the human in me do care about YellowFever...Without HER, a lot of people would have been killed some weeks ago...and if I had better human skills, I could have persuaded Jessica in a better way and that riot had never started." Xara continue "Chloe actual never harmed Elsa for real. She did however open her mind up for dreams and gave her a boyfriend in process...Who she truely enjoy..."
Elsa blush and Theresa look at something 'interesting' on her skirt.
"Chloe did never sleep with Cynthia's husbond either. She didn't even get close or alone with him. She tried to convince, yes, but you didn't fall for it and nothing happened."
Cynthia, who sit next to her big idol, nods "No...and somehow can't I blame her, if she really wanted to sleep with him." she smile "But he is mine and I trust him completely, even if she should try again."
"Chloe never got between you and Marc, Jessica. Whenever she was supposed to do so, Chloe as YellowFever had warned me ahead, so she could be 'stopped' in time and I don't think, that you...or Marc...ever noticed her."
"Ehh...No...We was...busy...with...each other." say Jessica with dreamy eyes.
Miranda break in "But she did almost kill me!"
Xara is a bit annoyed "Did you ever try to solve that pusle, Miranda? Deep inside is she a good girl, who never would harm her chieldhood girlfriend. Her only friend! She was forced by her father and older brother Charles..."
Jessica and Sarah look at Xara and both ask "Are you say...."
Miranda intercept "Yes, that's the very same Charles."
Xara continue "Morland did knew you was there, when he sent Chloe, but never told her. He wanted you out of the picture and he wanted her to think, she was responsible for your death, so he could manipulate Chloe the way he wanted. She wasen't innocent with the job, but she was innocent about you. She was also a victim!" Xara let Miranda swallow it, before she continue "That episode was the reason, that she contacted me as YellowFever and she begged me to watch over you after you woke up. That's the reason, why you have that tattoo between your shoulders...Chloe is only alive, because you are!"
Miranda swallow "Chloe...would...have kill...You send...Why...why didn't you tell me sooner?"
Xara looks sad "I really thought, you saw it as a problem and therefore would solved it...My mistake."
Jessica look at Miranda "Are you okay? Do you want my help?"
Miranda look surpriced between Xara and Jessica for a few secunds "Let me take a wild guess...Short before we came here, Xara told you, that she probably would need your skill, since she know that Elsa can't do anything for me with her skill. Thanks for your offer, Jessica, but I don't need."
Xara follow up "Yes, I did ask her to be ready, but I didn't mention any names."
Miranda dry her eyes "It's okay. Should we continue? Because I have a threesome with a motorbike and its driver later."
Xara smile to Miranda "I bet you have...Anyway, I asked you all to come here, because you all are good girls and all your names ends with an 'A'..."
Sarah interroupt "Ehh, you're wrong, mine ends with a 'H', just ask Butt..." Sylvia put a hand over Sarah's mouth, before she get too embarressed.
"Not pronounced." is Xara's short answer before she continue."I've got a vision a few days ago from a woman, who called herself for Loreta. She said, that there was at least one more woman in this town, who had an impressive skill. She didn't knew her skill or name other than it ends with an 'A' and maybe starts with a 'L', but that is unclear for now. That woman had also had some kind of contact with either Elsa, Jessica or Miranda, maybe even with more of them, but again, that was also unclear and so was grade of contact. Finally so is she the last one in this A-team, who is needed to save Chloe and destroy Morlands next plan."
"I think, that Loreta is an anagram." Miranda says "And could that fourt woman be Luana here?"
"I am number four?" say Luana surpriced "I don't have any special skill."
Jessica reply "I didn't thought either, before Xara shower up at that concert and told me. Sadly didn't I believe her, before it was to late."
"You're probably right about anagram, Miranda. Luana, if it is you, don't be afraid, we'll help you." Xara think for a moment "But it could also be that blond woman, we can't find!"

End of intro for Elsaverse part 4

So is Luana our next heorine?

xCooler2 did a great job and inspired me with this little intro, but he was wrong with name, but why?
A good girl's name ends with 'A' : Elsa, Jessica, Miranda, Sylvia, Theresa, Cynthia, Luana, Xara and Sarah (when it's pronounced as Xara say).
A good girl can only have a sexscene in one episode (Elsa is about to have one in FM, but we only see some foreplay, so sad...).
That leave us with Xara and Luana as only one, who is a good girl and didn't have a sexscene yet.
Of any other new women we see in FM:
Crow, who is very bad.
Lucile, who miss an 'A' in end of name.
Karen, who either is dead or try to kill Lucas.
The Tadaka sister? Well none of their names end with an 'A', only last name. But if a guy got all three, he sure would be lucky.
The croupier at casino without a name.
and finally the blondine in tavern (who look great btw and is Xara's secund bet), but no name for her either.

So my guess is Luana.
It could also be Vilma Zhirkova, but closer investigation shows, that she's identical with Miranda...and she allready have a boyfriend, but since she don't sleep, she could...ehh nvm...

???

Don't worry, JFR. It's fan fiction. It's cool. Completely and utterly wrong, but cool. (-:

mkh, I think you'll be happy with FM: Alpha...

Tlaero

tlaero wrote:Don't worry, JFR. It's fan fiction. It's cool. ...

Oh, ok. For a minute there I thought I might be having a stroke.