SexEd en Français !

[Tenebrys]

Une nouvelle version du jeu est disponible : Futa SexEd !
http://gamcore.com/games/futa_sexed
également sur newgrounds : http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/631488

PS : this new version is also in English

[kessie8yl]

Une nouvelle version du jeu est disponible : Futa SexEd !
http://gamcore.com/games/futa_sexed
également sur newgrounds : http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/631488

PS : this new version is also in English

I just played the new version once very quickly and I still like it - I have no real criticism but there is a fairly minor thing about the use of English.

You use the word "Seduce" to mean different things on the same screen. For example by selection the action of Talk with a girl you get a score of "Seduced +X" or "Seduced -X" but then you also have Seduce as one of the actions. Not only that but neither usage feels entirely natural to a native English speaker.

I would suggest a better word for the score might be "Attraction", so you become more or less attractive to the girl.

Secondly I would strongly recommend that you change the action word from Seduce to Flirt - The word flirt would suggest the level of conversation has moved on to become more intimate than just chatting about the weather or what was on TV last night, etc - when flirting both people are now reading the signs of attraction and deciding whether to take things to the next level. In English the entire process of getting the girl to have sex is a seduction, not just a single element.

This game continues to show promise and I look forward to seeing more from you.

Thank you

PS - Buying educational material seems to have no effect - or am I missing something?

[gamebp]

Une nouvelle version du jeu est disponible : Futa SexEd !
http://gamcore.com/games/futa_sexed
également sur newgrounds : http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/631488

PS : this new version is also in English

C'est possible de savoir combien il t'as payé pour qu'il sponsorise ce jeu ?

[Tenebrys]

I just played the new version once very quickly and I still like it - I have no real criticism but there is a fairly minor thing about the use of English.

You use the word "Seduce" to mean different things on the same screen. For example by selection the action of Talk with a girl you get a score of "Seduced +X" or "Seduced -X" but then you also have Seduce as one of the actions. Not only that but neither usage feels entirely natural to a native English speaker.

I would suggest a better word for the score might be "Attraction", so you become more or less attractive to the girl.

Secondly I would strongly recommend that you change the action word from Seduce to Flirt - The word flirt would suggest the level of conversation has moved on to become more intimate than just chatting about the weather or what was on TV last night, etc - when flirting both people are now reading the signs of attraction and deciding whether to take things to the next level. In English the entire process of getting the girl to have sex is a seduction, not just a single element.

ok, thank you for your review ! I will take care to not redo the same mistake.

This game continues to show promise and I look forward to seeing more from you.

Thank you

I'm working on a third version. it's going to use modules and external resources. that way there will be more content and everybody will be able to add their own elements.

PS - Buying educational material seems to have no effect - or am I missing something?

educational material give you +2 bonus points when teaching : with better materials you are a better teacher.