"Office Night" game - the end of the first part

[shark]

here is the last scene of the first part:

(The game is ended and on-line. The link was removed to the aim of release the server)

Our secretary (who still has no name) is going to lose her bra and her skirt…
The part with the skirt is a little bit different from FUNNY's scenario because the action to take the feather, to put the feather back to use the caress hand and to take the feather a second time, was difficult to do…

By waiting for funny's return to work on the second part, It would be good to end this first part (dialogues and sound)

- Robert, are you always ok to be the sound technician of the project?

- If somebody want to take charge with writing the dialogues (see the first part descrïption by funny) he will be welcome ( I speak English too badly)

[Morgue]

Ok I did everything..........

I caress the tit through the bra to get the feather.
I used the feather on her tits to get her to finish to take the bra off.
I then caressed the legs and tits but still could not get the skirt off....
What am I doing wrong?

Dor
feels like an idiot.

[Morgue]

I figured it out.....
You have to play with nipple.


Dor
is an idiot.

[mister]

An excellent beginning - well, middle I suppose. I look forward to more. Keep up the amazing work!

[shark]

Morgue wrote : I figured it out.....
You have to play with nipple.

good!!!. You are really a specialist

[Morgue]

I would do the Dialogues for the game and do the game justice and use spell check...... just tell me what you would care for her to say to some extent....

Dor
is special idiot for Shark posted it so.

[Chunli_49]

I like what I see so far.

[Robert]

I'll work on the sounds.

Also, I write professionally as a major part of my work. As Morgue is going to do the dialogues, if will send his drafts to me I can check and edit them.

[shark]

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The dialogues must be imagined from the situations described by funny
At the beginning, for example, you will have to imagine the words between the boss (player) and the secretary whom he discovers alone, in the evening, in the office.

We can have a small dialogue sequence between 2 levels of the game (remove the jacket, the blouse...)

Some words, also, to explain particular actions of the game (you light the fragrant candle, the girl is more relaxed...)

The dialogues must not to be too long, to don't break the rhythm of the game, but they can be used for giving the erotic atmosphere of the game…

Texts are an important part of the game and I think that ideas of several persons are necessary.
Somebody just has to take charge of the coordination.

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[funny]

WOW! This is a great thing to come back to! Thanks Shark and everyone! Great.

The only problem I had was using the feather on the tits, it seemed like you had to be pretty acurate, and it was pretty challenging.

Otherwise it is all great.

I will be happy to help Dor with the dialogue! Just let me know Dor.

[shark]

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Hello Funny
Happy of your return...

funny wrote : it seemed like you had to be pretty acurate, and it was pretty challenging.

Please, can you explain to me this sentence, I don't understand all the words, even with a translator.

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[funny]

Hi shark!
Thanks for the welcome, it is nice to be back!

My sentence

"it seemed like you had to be pretty acurate, and it was pretty challenging."

Hmm, by this, I mean, I had trouble finding the exact spot to tickle with the feather.

I would tickle around her left breast and she would laugh, but I really had to find the bottom left spot before the orgasm meter would rise. I found it a bit difficult to find that exact spot.
The same thing happened to me on the other side.

It is not necessarily a bad thing, as it makes the game more challenging. Just something I noticed.

Here is the translation of what I just typed:
"Hmm, par ceci, je veux dire, j'ai eu l'ennui trouvant la tache exacte pour chatouiller avec la plume. Je chatouillerais autour de son sein gauche et elle rirait, mais je vraiment ai dû trouver la tache gauche inférieure avant que le mètre d'orgasme monte. Je l'ai trouvé un peu difficile de trouver cette tache exacte. La même chose est arrivée à moi de l'autre côté. Ce n'est pas nécessairement une mauvaise chose, car il rend le jeu plus provocant. Juste quelque chose que j'ai notée."

What translation website do you use shark? I like bable fish here:

http://world.altavista.com/

[shark]

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Thank you for your explanations

The good place to tickle with the end of the feather is on the breast, just above the bra… and you don't have to stop moving the mouse…

It is true that this part is a little bit difficult , but remember your first sentence:
“Could you make a game similar to in bed with Alison (with the same lenght/difficulty)”
Our "office girl" is like Alison, we need efforts to obtain her favours

thanks for the translator address, I use those:
http://www.reverso.net/text_translation.asp
http://tr.voila.fr/

[Robert]

Shark,

I have been ill for a few days and not able to do any work. I will see if I can work on sounds for the game now. I will see the doctor again next week and hope I will be better after that and will be able to do more work.

Sorry about that.
Robert

[shark]

Quiet Robert, it is just a game and the fun (and the health) has to pass before the work.

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