Please go back to my post that started this, where I was asking for help in writing this story
I would be happy to explain why I have included the two kids in this story but Green told me to shut up so I will.
I realize that you gave an indication that there was a boundary you would not cross, and that is good. But I still find it strange/alarming that you wanted to include certain aspects at all. TheBrain described the reason this is alarming and off-putting very well. But I would like to hear your explanation.
Graen, I think she is waiting for your permission to explain herself, can you give it? Or I guess Shark's permission would be more important, Shark, can you please say if she can explain herself or not?