Well done, il joker, your art is excellent and it's good to be able to navigate between frames properly. If I have one criticism it is that the dialogue is stilted, leaves a lot to be desired and doesn't approach the quality of the art. I realise that you may not be comfortable telling your story in english whereas art is a universal language.

I look forward to seeing Part 3

il joker I did note your comment in response to mine re dialogue placement.

I didn't quite know how to phrase a comment regarding your use of English but what Greebo says is true; and yes writing in what is not your native language does have problems, once I tried writing to a Japanese lady, Oh! mon Dieu!!

well, my friends, thank you so much for your appreciations...for the dialogues...well...i'm trying to do my best...and the third part is ready to be posted...have a nice time...

really good job with part 3....nicely done....the only complaint that i have is that Ahmed face is really white with a sheen to it, other then that very nice modeling and a good quick story....keep up the good work....looking forward to you next project...

great job with this project! I hope this wasnt your last one

Don't be afraid...i have a new story ready to go...and another one on the way...If you continue to show your appreciations, maybe Mr.Shark will allow me to continue our collaboration...Thank you

il joker wrote : Don't be afraid...i have a new story ready to go...and another one on the way...If you continue to show your appreciations, maybe Mr.Shark will allow me to continue our collaboration...Thank you

I'm looking forward to seeing them!

il joker wrote :maybe Mr.Shark will allow me to continue our collaboration...

With much pleasure…. Your work is excellent.

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another good one il joker...the joker parts were real funny...it would be nice to get that lucky in a sauna...keep up the good work...

Respect, il Joker, you are a real BAD boy!!

many thanks to all that appreciate my efforts...I hope you enjoy my works as I do...and, Arnulf...I'm not that bad...:-)...Respect, man...(between the lines...I have another one on the way...quite dialogued...but i think that this time you'll have to wait...or you become greedy...(thank you shark) )
Have a nice time...
(aaaaand...cut!!!)

aww, too bad we have to wait. but its worth the waiting i bet

Hi guys!

I'm sure I would pretty much enjoy the artwork "Naheela's pains" if only...........the links to the episodes worked!!!!

There does not seem to be a html working link to the various parts!

Could you kindly give hints?

Thanks.

Regards,
Wayne.