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Re: Character Feedback

Postby tlaero » Sat, 17May13 02:46

Definite improvements in Char06 and Char07. Extreme improvement is Char09 and Char17. Nice work.

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Re: Character Feedback

Postby MaxCarna » Sat, 17May13 03:00

PinkVendeta wrote:Pic 6 aka Char19_BodyPicture: this is kind of bizarre, as from her face I assumed her to be slim, fit.


She's almost at her 40's, has her own place. I made the body voluptuous but the belly is on shape. The breast is big, already has some gravity effect, not much. The clothes maybe cause a wrong impression in this pose

tlaero wrote:Definite improvements in Char06 and Char07. Extreme improvement is Char09 and Char17. Nice work.


Thank you very much
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Re: Character Feedback

Postby Niauropsaka » Mon, 17May15 09:31

LRM wrote:Nice job MaxCarna;
I'd happily awake next to any of them with one exception... If I awoke next to the Dean, I'd gnaw my arm off to escape without waking her, and swear off what ever I had to drink the night before ;) .
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Really good job on the art.


Oh, the Dean? I love her face. I think I almost commented on her specifically when I first saw this thread.

I like the coffee shop owner's build.
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Re: Character Feedback

Postby dustylefty » Fri, 17Jun09 02:58

02 Aunt: Wow! If she was my aunt... Anyway, I love her gaze and overall look
03: Cute! Love her lips. Would take out for a fling
04-6 Students: Wish I went to school with them!
07: Hot for teacher!
08: Especially with the full body shot and explanation of the character, I really like her.
09: Great gymnast! You captured her
10 Instructor: a tad masculine, but that might really work for her character.
11 Hunter: also a bit masculine, but I can understand considering she's a hunter. I wouldn't turn her down!
12: Succubus: I need to see more of her! I might just sale my soul.
17-20: Excellent! I especially love the mom and the saleswoman. I'd love to hook up with them.

I'm new here. Do you have any games out already? I'd love to play them! Or any more examples of your work that you'd like to show off?
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Re: Character Feedback

Postby MaxCarna » Fri, 17Jun09 08:47

dustylefty wrote:I'm new here. Do you have any games out already? I'd love to play them! Or any more examples of your work that you'd like to show off?


Hi Dusty,

I illustrated "Afternoon to Remember", it is on the Project section. I just made a comment in the post today. The history was already written, I created the images and a third partner make the code with AngularJS. It is kinda interactive history, you make some choices about how it is going, with bad and good ends. Rich text.

The project for this characters it's more like a game with challenges, status rise, repetitive actions... and so, I'm making on my own. Until now I'm finishing 20 characters, wrote the text for some events, planned 28 environments of which I already finished 4.

I'm studying change the 10 Instructor to a Genesis 3 model plus massive morphs, something like:
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Hunter in her glory (I needed to cover her, because the image host doesn't allow nudity)
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Succubus full body
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