Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

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Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby LostTrout » Tue, 15Oct20 06:06

I've recently been learning Daz. I wrote a little story and illustrated it with pictures. It's called Happy Birthday, with Love, Your Friend Rachel. What do you think?

I don't have a website, so I'm using a direct link.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/p1odlssviilo4nc/Happy%20birthday%20with%20love%20your%20friend%20Rachel.zip?dl=0
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby fleet » Tue, 15Oct20 16:47

I enjoyed the story. You mentioned DAZ, but what software did you use to make the story in html format?
Check out my latest adult visual novel "The Privateer and the Governor's Niece"
at http://the-new-lagoon.com/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=3895
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby hughx » Tue, 15Oct20 22:46

That's Twine with the SugarCube story format add-on.

It's a good story and the images are very nice.
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby jvit » Thu, 15Oct22 01:27

Cute story, I liked it.
I post some of my renders here: http://the-new-lagoon.com/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=3589&start=30
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby BobbyTally » Thu, 15Oct22 20:14

Thank you for sharing your work. It is a nice story.
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby Super » Fri, 15Oct23 04:43

Always nice to have some fluffy porn :3 Very nice

You thinking about doing something bigger?
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby LostTrout » Fri, 15Oct23 21:54

I don't have much time, so I only make short pieces. I specifically started learning Daz because writing takes so long. Unfortunately, it took me an hour to make each picture. It's not much faster than writing.

I'm considering turning this into a game though. If I can think of enough material.
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby Niauropsaka » Tue, 15Oct27 00:19

That was sweet! Nice to see.
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby LostTrout » Wed, 16Mar02 07:47

I've tried to turn the story into a game but I can't think of enough good puzzles. The best I could think of was a puzzle where Rachel would have to get her parents out of the house so she could have sex in it but I couldn't think of a good solution.

If I want to turn it into a game, I need to give Rachel the option of having sex with other people. Given the nature of the story, I was worried that the game would end up with too much of a netorare feel. To balance that out, I needed the main romance path with Josh to have a mega sex scene in it. I decided that a good way to make a mega sex scene would be to let the player choose from many different positions to have sex in.

The upshot is that I ended up making a lot of pictures for all the different sex positions. I've uploaded a new version of the story. You can jump right to the end to view all the pictures.
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby MalleckM » Tue, 16Jul12 17:20

You could make higher resolution. So far, it is too low.
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby Blue » Wed, 16Jul13 13:12

Very nice!
Keep doing)

Sincerely, Blue
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Re: Happy birthday, with love, your friend Rachel

Postby LostTrout » Sat, 16Jul16 07:04

Thanks. Small pictures render faster. It's also easier to hide mistakes in them.

Bigger pictures would make me so frustrated that I wouldn't enjoy it. Making small pictures already tests my patience.
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