Re: The Photoshoot

[Yamato]

Thanks everyone.

[Squeeky]

Yamato wrote : Thanks everyone.

Yes, Greebo probably says it all for me.

I realise that the thought that crossed my mind almost at this moment is far too late.

In actual fact it is properly attended in other genre but that doesn't mean it could not be applied within this field.

I want to emphasise that it is too late to backtrack, this thought is just an example.

She is walking out of the door for the first time. The Photographer offers her $X for Lingerie, $Y Topless, $Z Naked.

At various points through these can be the "choose your adventure" where she is lead into the outcome desired by the "sponsors".

I very much realise that because of the genre, multiple images per page, and where do you make a break, the concept may be highly difficult but not necessarily to be discounted for any future collusion. Let's also get a point clear. In other genres of choice variables come into play. I am not suggesting that at all, merely that there is unseen "map" placed before the reader who follows a logical but lineal track from A to B.

I have continuing interesting and appreciation of this well thought through work.

[LRM]

Squeeky wrote :

Yes, Greebo probably says it all for me.

I realise that the thought that crossed my mind almost at this moment is far too late.

In actual fact it is properly attended in other genre but that doesn't mean it could not be applied within this field.

I want to emphasise that it is too late to backtrack, this thought is just an example.

She is walking out of the door for the first time. The Photographer offers her $X for Lingerie, $Y Topless, $Z Naked.

At various points through these can be the "choose your adventure" where she is lead into the outcome desired by the "sponsors".

I very much realise that because of the genre, multiple images per page, and where do you make a break, the concept may be highly difficult but not necessarily to be discounted for any future collusion. Let's also get a point clear. In other genres of choice variables come into play. I am not suggesting that at all, merely that there is unseen "map" placed before the reader who follows a logical but lineal track from A to B.

I have continuing interesting and appreciation of this well thought through work.

The Lady in my life I'm certain, if presented with money for her continuation as you suggest, would apply a large red mark to the face of the offerer and leave the premises never to return. Squeeky I think the Ladies in your life would do the same.
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Yamato It is a very interesting series and I eagerly await the next installments.

[Squeeky]

@LRM, I have no dispute with that. I'd hate to see a daughter of mine in such a dilemma. But for the nature of the genre I'm just asking ....

[okimaon1]

I love it. Nice work.

[Son-of-Odin]

Many thanks to Goblinboy and Yamato for creating this awesome story. Excellent graphics, great story. I´m too curious how it will go on.

[David]

Thanks Goblinboy and Yamato for a great looking series! Keep up the good work.

[Hakkie]

Wonderfull work again, thank you goblinboy and yamato!

Can't wait for more releases.

[cruiser]

nice
courious what happens next

[afaw41]

My Thanks To Both of You Yamato and Goblinboy Great story Hope to see more Chapters soon.

[Rastifan]

Damn things got heated up. Love it. Posing is wonderfully done. Looking forward to the rest.

[jayzeewood]

Part 3 is good at last we get to see Amelie in the flesh

[Jackson]

I really like the graphics on this one! It's really well done and the story is developing alright aswell. Waiting to see more!
thx a lot for your work!

[okimaon1]

part 3 is amazing. seems like you released some breaks...cant wait for ep 4.

[Hakkie]

Great episode again!