The scene where he is getting head under the desk while talking to the cop was so hot, but it didn't last long enough at all. That is the kind of erotice scene that you should extend, in my opinion and really get the most out of it. For example, have the cop sit down, and since he said the "Columbia Project" while she was there, and she is now turned on, have her flirt with him, not knowing he's already getting taken care of under the desk. It could have been this highly erotic situation where she's looking for excuses to stay and trying to get him interested in her, while he is being turned on by her but fearing her finding out about his assistant under his desk. So he's trying to get rid of the cop and hold in his orgasm until she's gone, while his assistant is trying to make him cum, and teh cop is trying to turn him on and get him to flirt with her. And then he would eventually be overcome by his assitant's work on his shaft coulpled with the cop's attempts to get his interest, and he has an orgasm while the cop is there, trying to keep a straight face while he blasts is goo into his assistant's open mouth under the desk: A wasted opportunity, I think. But as always, I offer this opinion with respect and gratitude for what you do.