Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

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Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby K84 » Wed, 17Feb01 21:03

I'm creating a new game and it's impossible for me to test it just because it has many combinations of code, screens that need to overlap with others, etc.

At this moment this game only has a few options and interaction with Sarah (Kelly's mother).

This first game, Kelly's Family: Mother in law, is about a couple (Tom and Kelly) who decide to compromise and need the approval of her family to get married. For this we will have to live and get approval from different members of Kelly's family (mother, older sister and little sister) in three different games.

If someone wants to try it and report errors I can send the links to you privately.

Known bugs:
Day of the week doesn't change FIXED
Kitchen image FIXED
Stroke Character's name FIXED
Rollback enabled FIXED
Info for hotspot FIXED
Load option at Main menu FIXED
Intro volume too high FIXED
Sexperience bug at pool FIXED

Some screenshoots

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SPOILER (click SHOW to view)

Tom asking for marriage
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Time to meet Sarah
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Caught by Sarah
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Out of here!
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Time to wake up (image not included yet)
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Flirting in the pool (image not included yet)
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Last edited by K84 on Tue, 17Apr04 14:58, edited 8 times in total.
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby hughx » Thu, 17Feb02 17:19

I'd have a look, if you like. PM me a link.

Do you want the bug report here in this forum channel or in a private message?
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby K84 » Thu, 17Feb02 17:58

hughx wrote:I'd have a look, if you like. PM me a link.

Do you want the bug report here in this forum channel or in a private message?


In this post or in a private message, wherever you prefer
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby hughx » Thu, 17Feb02 19:12

I like it so far. The models look good, the backgrounds are all great. If I was to be very picky, the perspective or something is off in the Tom & Kelly sex image in the beginning, but everything else look good. I went to each room on the hour and encountered no bugs aside from the day of the week not changing as you mentioned. Each of the options in the rooms passed the amount of time they were labeled with, and the game seemed to function without issue or crashing on Windows 10. I have one issue below, the rest is just English tweaks without changing your intent, hopefully.

Better English "fixes" in keeping with your translated text (in order of appearance):

Tom and Kelly, a couple of young lovers who just finished their studies in university wanted to start a life together.

Everything was so wonderful that one afternoon, Tom brought Kelly to a romantic forest and asked her to marry him.

Despite the surprise, Kelly accepted with some conditions. Before getting married, Tom should have the approval of her family.

KELLY: I see you are a little nervous Tom. Don't worry, everything will be fine. It will only be a few weeks.

TOM: I don't know, I'm not really sure about this.

KELLY: Tom, this is Sarah, my mother. Mom, meet Tom, my boyfriend.

CHOICES-
Formal greeting
Kiss her hand

TOM: Nice to meet you Sarah, now I understand why your daughter is so beautiful.

SARAH: I have to go do some shopping, but I will be back later. Please make yourself comfortable. Kelly will show you around our home.

KELLY: Let me show you my room right now. Then, you'll know where to find me when you want company.

TOM: Kelly, I don't know if this is a good idea. It's a little strange coming into your mother's house and...

KELLY: Calm down, we're alone here, nobody's going to find out. Let me help you relax...

SARAH: WHAT ARE YOU DOING? Get your cock out of my daughter's mouth, right now!

SARA: Kelly, I'm disappointed in you! Coming into my home and fucking like crazy? This is unacceptable, I don't recognize you.

TOM: I hope so. It wasn't the best way to start to get to know each other, her to seeing her daughter giving me a blowjob.

TOM: What can I do now that Sarah dislikes me? I guess I'll start by putting my things in my room and I'll try to be as polite as possible.

CHOICE:
Put the luggage in its place (This is awkward. Try, "Unpack your luggage.")

KELLY: Tom? We're back. Come help with the bags.

KELLY: I talked to my mom about what happened. I think that we should abstain from having sex while we're here, out of respect for her. She hasn't had sex since she divorced my father and we're staying under her roof.

TOM: Well we are going to be married...WAIT! We can't do anything for the simple fact that she doesn't either? Great.

KELLY: For now, that's the way it has to be. I'm sorry. Maybe when she gets to know you better... Look, let's just go to sleep and start over tomorrow.

TOM: (Wow! Kelly's mom has a great body...I better get out of here before she sees me.)

SARAH: How long have you been watching me pervert? Get out of here, right now!

TOM: (Oh, Sarah. I don't know what to say to her.)

SARAH: It's nice to start the morning with a compliment. Thank you, Tom. It's no secret really, I work hard to take care of myself.

TOM: I think you're being modest. I bet you'd look just as fantastic without any effort.

SARAH: That's very flattering, Tom. You're going to make me blush. Enjoy your day.

SARAH: There's the fridge, have whatever you like.


Questionable encounter (maybe a bug of sorts):

At 6:00 if you enter the Kitchen and choose, "take a snack" you get a new picture of Tom drinking the juice and 1 hour passes making it 7:00. This means that Sarah is in the kitchen and you have 2 new choices of dialogue. After choosing, and ending the scene with Sarah, the next image is Tom drinking the juice. I think it should just go back to the Kitchen scene with the Take a snack option. I ate at 6:00 already, but I saw the juice image again. That make sense? I also changed Sarah's response above from "Enjoy your breakfast" to "Enjoy your day." because I may just be entering the kitchen to chat with her and not eat at all.
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby K84 » Thu, 17Feb02 20:03

Wow hughx! A wonderful and complete correction!. Regarding the kitchen scene I will correct it.

Thank you very much
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby Skelaturi » Thu, 17Feb02 22:43

I would suggest in private, in the case of proofreading. That way it's less of a spoiler for others. If they decide to come look here.
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby karrek » Fri, 17Feb03 01:27

I'll try it out too if you'll send me the link.
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby scrumbles » Fri, 17Feb03 01:43

I would like to give it a try too, even if I cannot proofread. :)
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby GingkoBiloba » Fri, 17Feb03 19:05

I've some extra free time in the upcoming days, i'll be glad to test your game, PM the info, Thanks!
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby Salamandastron » Fri, 17Feb03 21:53

Always down for testing a new game. :)
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby HeyChief » Sat, 17Feb04 04:23

Hi, is the also up on your Pat**** Page?, I know I have seen the opening screen some where.
Please let me know with a Prv Message, thank you.
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby Michuncik » Sat, 17Feb04 08:36

please send me a link :)
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby braspol » Sat, 17Feb04 20:09

would also like a link
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby Michuncik » Sun, 17Feb05 08:00

i noticed that numbers of days changed but name of day is always monday :)
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Re: Early Alpha Testers ((Kelly's Family: Mother in law))

Postby bobsuncle1 » Sun, 17Feb05 12:26

I wouldn't mind a link
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