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I need help with English correction

Postby K84 » Sat, 16Aug06 01:05

I'm making a game in python (Renpy) and first demo is finished. The original language of this game is Spanish and I'm translating to english without help. I need English correction because my english level is medium and with this topics.... is poor. If someone want to help me with this I would be very grateful
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby el drakki » Sat, 16Aug06 08:31

Por mi lo puedes sacar tal y como está :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby Salamandastron » Sat, 16Aug06 12:17

If you send me the script at secretsal666(at)gmail(dot)com, I could give it a try over the weekend.
Cheers, and good luck either way.
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby K84 » Sat, 16Aug06 12:17

el drakki wrote:Por mi lo puedes sacar tal y como está :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Podría, pero es bastante tedioso comprobar todo 10 veces y empaquetarlo. Luego traducir el codigo palabra por palabra y volver a comprobar......

Salamandastron wrote:If you send me the script at secretsal666(at)gmail(dot)com, I could give it a try over the weekend.
Cheers, and good luck either way.

I can send you a private message with the link to the game

I do not know if I should post the link to the demo for a quick overview and a first opinion on errors in translation here, it might be easier and faster to wait volunteers.
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby Salamandastron » Tue, 16Aug09 13:53

Yep, PM would work.
But you're right, posting a public demo in a thread like this would probably get you more feedback.
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby Skelaturi » Tue, 16Aug09 18:24

Salamandastron wrote:Yep, PM would work.
But you're right, posting a public demo in a thread like this would probably get you more feedback.


Depends, if a moderator sees 1 little link in that demo he isn't happy with. The topic will get shut down.
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby muttdoggy » Tue, 16Aug09 22:32

Count me in.. I'll help you. [img]images/icones/icon7.gif[/img]
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby K84 » Fri, 16Aug12 01:12

Skelaturi wrote:Depends, if a moderator sees 1 little link in that demo he isn't happy with. The topic will get shut down.


What kind of link?. I mean put the link to Mega (direct download) for correction. This game has only one image link to support in a donation platform on the menu. I never put a link a donation platform here.
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby shark » Fri, 16Aug12 08:18

K84 wrote: This game has only one image link to support in a donation platform on the menu.

If the link is in the game itself, the game is subject to the rule...
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby K84 » Fri, 16Aug12 12:46

[img]images/icones/icon7.gif[/img] No link game
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby caravaggio » Fri, 16Aug12 13:22

I'm not a native english speaker, but since I manage to speak both spanish and english maybe I can help if you send me the link.
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby el drakki » Fri, 16Aug12 20:53

Nene! He jugado la demo y el juego me parece soberbio, muy bonitas las chicas (la rubia un pelín más [img]images/icones/icon15.gif[/img] ) y los decorados muy currados.
Solo pondré una pega, el juego parece ser lineal, con una sola dirección. No sé si es tu primer juego o si hacer que tenga varias ramas es harto complicado. Quizás tienes pensado hacer que tenga varios finales, ya que era una demo. En tal caso de puta madre, si no, no pasa nada, es que me gusta criticar [img]images/icones/icon15.gif[/img] .
No quiero comerte la olla, pero sigue así, me ha encantado. [img]images/icones/icon7.gif[/img]
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby el drakki » Fri, 16Aug12 20:54

Se me olvidaba, si quieres traducirlo al francés, puedo ayudarte.
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby K84 » Sat, 16Aug13 07:44

el drakki wrote:Nene! He jugado la demo y el juego me parece soberbio, muy bonitas las chicas (la rubia un pelín más [img]images/icones/icon15.gif[/img] ) y los decorados muy currados.
Solo pondré una pega, el juego parece ser lineal, con una sola dirección. No sé si es tu primer juego o si hacer que tenga varias ramas es harto complicado. Quizás tienes pensado hacer que tenga varios finales, ya que era una demo. En tal caso de puta madre, si no, no pasa nada, es que me gusta criticar [img]images/icones/icon15.gif[/img] .
No quiero comerte la olla, pero sigue así, me ha encantado. [img]images/icones/icon7.gif[/img]


Bien apuntado, como bien dices en la demo es bastante lineal, es mi primer juego y quizá en tema gráfico enfoqué demasiado, renderizado más retoque me sale a 5 minutos por imagen y claro.... Aún así estoy con las nuevas escenas y habrá final con posibilidades de trío, con una, con la otra, etc. Espero hacerlo lo más dinámico posible aunque es complicado como bien dices.

el drakki wrote:Se me olvidaba, si quieres traducirlo al francés, puedo ayudarte.

Pués estaría genial poder traducirlo a cuantos más idiomas mejor, aunque me parece un poco descarado pedir traducciones completas en vez de correciones y yo en francés, lo que puede dar de sí 3 meses de trabajo en Francia y 2 cursos de ESO. Por mi si te animas...

Un saludo y mil gracias

PD: Una foto por lo de que la rubia mejor :D, espero que no sea demasiado X para el foro y me la borren
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Re: I need help with English correction

Postby cj1015 » Thu, 16Sep01 01:15

Well my Spanish is passible. My english is pretty good...

The trouble non-native speakers run into when translating is that it's awkward, I have found this to be true in many games.
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