Thanks everyone for the replies:
As far as the server error, I knew it would max out soon .. so I am changing it to a new server.
The only problem I have with the game is the last day you have two girls without taking them on a date so you just pick one of them. I think it would be better if the final day is a date between the last two , then pick one for marriage.
I did write out a picnic scene with final two girls. I decided to cut it out because I figured by then you probably know who you would want. When I play games I can only take so much reading, then my brain turns off. So I cut the final scene out and make it just one final question.
Is it only possible to have one sexual encounter per day?
Yes, only one scene per day. Also, only each girl once. I thought this would add the replay-ability. I wouldn't want to sit through 56 sexual encounters each time I played.
Are you planning on making a downloadable version? (zip file)
Maybe, it's crossed my mind. I'm not sure if the logic would work .. every value is stored as a secession variable, and I don't know if that works offline. I would have to do some checking.
My second complaint the 6th day (the one with the three dates) is so well written, the next day is a real let down. It just didn't have a satisfying end. Two ways it could be improved- Either cut the last day and have you make your final decision at the end of the previous day from the final three girls. OR keep it the same length have the girl you have a lower score with visit you in the middle of the night to try to convince you to pick her.
I agree with all of this.
The player character looks so bizarre.
My goal was to make him fairly generic looking. My goal was for you to be able to put yourself in his situation.
It's a bit of an overwhelming and dry start to the game.
Agreed. I never liked the intro. Just figured I would throw it all out there to get it out of the way.
Thanks everyone for your help.
- Steve