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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Mimailia » Sat, 16Jan09 10:46

For me, the answer is easy - don't do cumshots. (I just don't get it.)
But I've gotta say, yours is the FIRST one I've ever seen that looks 100% real.

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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby GDS » Sat, 16Jan09 14:22

Mortze wrote:Not bad at all!
You even use some shadowing on the cum. Good detail.

Shadows? Did I?
I just cut and paste from a random photo from google search

Mimailia wrote:For me, the answer is easy - don't do cumshots. (I just don't get it.)
But I've gotta say, yours is the FIRST one I've ever seen that looks 100% real.

M


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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Niauropsaka » Sun, 16Jan10 07:02

That's brilliantly done, actually.

And maybe I've been looking at 3D art too long, but I thought the shiny hair was fine.
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Super » Sun, 16Jan10 07:23

Is it just me or is the girl on the right a bit cross eyed?

But yeah mostly seems like you have nothing to worry about to me :p
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Mortze » Sun, 16Jan10 20:06

Super wrote:Is it just me or is the girl on the right a bit cross eyed?

When you look at something so close to your face your eyes do cross like that :) Try it and take a picture of yourself looking at your finger next to your nose :)
It may look funny but it sure looks realistic.
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby LRM » Sun, 16Jan10 20:18

If I'm about to deliver my load... and I notice the woman servicing me is cross-eyed... she isn't doing it correctly!!!
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Mortze » Sun, 16Jan10 20:52

LRM wrote:If I'm about to deliver my load... and I notice the woman servicing me is cross-eyed... she isn't doing it correctly!!!

When she looks back at you she won't be cross-eyed since you'r eyes are more far than your... LRM's extension.
When she looks at it again and it's right in front of her eyes they will automatically cross.
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby GDS » Mon, 16Jan11 16:35

Super wrote:Is it just me or is the girl on the right a bit cross eyed?

But yeah mostly seems like you have nothing to worry about to me :p


How it that possible the hair covers her left eye, lol


And other notes I started to put minigames on the sex scenes,
like move the mouse to move the hand,
or
*click here* to pound ass, this kind of thing,
So how long is too long to stay on the same animation, like licking her pussy by hovering the mouse

I making 5seconds for each line,
so every 5 seconds she says something like "pound harder" lick over there" " It is kind of good" etc,
on about 10 per scene, so its around 50s if you are fast enough to move the mouse
Too much? too little?
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Super » Mon, 16Jan11 20:28

I never really liked sex minigames like that personally but that's just me
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby fleet » Mon, 16Jan11 22:15

GDS wrote:And other notes I started to put minigames on the sex scenes,
like move the mouse to move the hand,
or
*click here* to pound ass, this kind of thing,
So how long is too long to stay on the same animation, like licking her pussy by hovering the mouse

I making 5seconds for each line,
so every 5 seconds she says something like "pound harder" lick over there" " It is kind of good" etc,
on about 10 per scene, so its around 50s if you are fast enough to move the mouse
Too much? too little?


I'm unsure about the software you use to make your games, but some game making programs have a 'wait until mouse button is clicked" command
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby bartux » Mon, 16Jan11 23:42

on the other hand I really enjoy mini games in a game of this kind.
I'm pretty impressed by your work here.
Artists here seem to be very helpful and you're doing great yet.

the cumshot is a very difficult task and you have done something very nice.

The game length of 1 minute per scene seems to be a good compromise [img]images/icones/icon7.gif[/img]
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby GDS » Tue, 16Jan12 00:52

After a whole freaking day trying to figure you why my close up shots looks like the girl had firefly on the pussy.

took my whole Monday but I kind of got better working with lighting and stuff:

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Pussy Fireflys on close angles, ALWAYS Fucking Always

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After 100s of tutorials on how to position lights.


Damn I could have writes and coded a lot of scenes today,
but wasted my day looking for a cure for the Pussy Fireflys.

We need some kind of tutorial area for this,
molding Vags and extreme close-up need alot of work.

And dont let me get started how the dicks were looking like lizards because of the shading
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Mortze » Tue, 16Jan12 01:21

Seems like you had a non shadowed light pointing at her jayjay.

Can you point me to the skin product you used for that model? I really like the freckles on her face.
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby Niauropsaka » Tue, 16Jan12 03:13

That's consistent enough that you should check if you have an ambient colour on the vagina surface. If you do, try taking the ambient strength down to 0.
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Re: Need opinions on my Game Renders

Postby GDS » Tue, 16Jan12 11:09

Mortze wrote:Seems like you had a non shadowed light pointing at her jayjay.

It was the distant light with no shadow, I was using to light the background with it.

Mortze wrote:Can you point me to the skin product you used for that model? I really like the freckles on her face.

Extreme close-up for G2

Niauropsaka wrote:That's consistent enough that you should check if you have an ambient colour on the vagina surface. If you do, try taking the ambient strength down to 0.

Ambient color was at zero,
its was map reflection of the AoA surface caused buy a light without shadow + distant light
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