Help to make the image data is more beautiful.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/0hfzuj1sej8fyi8/3.png?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/vja7kizj0h69c ... F.png?dl=0

If you are not difficult to edit them in Photoshop and give instructions in the sequence of your actions.

Why no one wants to help?

https://www.dropbox.com/s/vja7kizj0h69c ... F.png?dl=0

This one just seems a bit... off?

Maybe because the girl is a built a bit too much like a man, I think. Guess I just don't really like overly muscular girls

But otherwise, the lighting seems weird? I don't really know how to explain it, just seems off. Not an artist here.

Super wrote:https://www.dropbox.com/s/vja7kizj0h69c83/18%20-%20%D0%BA%D0%BE%D0%BF%D0%B8%D1%8F.png?dl=0

This one just seems a bit... off?

Maybe because the girl is a built a bit too much like a man, I think. Guess I just don't really like overly muscular girls

But otherwise, the lighting seems weird? I don't really know how to explain it, just seems off. Not an artist here.

Thank you

Why all the silence?

The "Sexy Girls" forum is for people making pictures.

No, this is the right place for asking questions and getting help. Currently our friend is wanting advice to improve his skills not put his art up for general exhibition.

lee1400 wrote:Why all the silence?

maybe some people are just unable to help you, you are after all asking for a huge favor. Letting the experts mess with your pictures, and then telling you what they actually done.

lee1400 wrote:Help to make the image data is more beautiful.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/0hfzuj1sej8fyi8/3.png?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/vja7kizj0h69c ... F.png?dl=0

If you are not difficult to edit them in Photoshop and give instructions in the sequence of your actions.

Now i am no artist, so thats why i originally kept out of here, but with

lee1400 wrote:Why all the silence?

and

lee1400 wrote:Why no one wants to help?

i gotta tell one more thing, you sir already have a topic open at viewtopic.php?f=11&t=3365 wich has the same sort of questions like the top one. So my question to you is, why open a completely new one? While the other is probaly being followed by those who are attempting to help there.

Tried to send comics renderotica.com, here's the answer from them:

"Hi,
thank you for your interest in brokering for Renderotica. Unfortunately we are going to decline at this time. You need to strive to improve your lighting and posing ability before your comics will be ready for retail quality."

Tell me, what's wrong? Objectively they?
This is what I sent to them:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/04oxqfq22podfjf/1.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mmsfyt246dojmik/7.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/hr48ufbbnoi7kmy/16.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ttas04y8nva74kl/18.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/34euoy8j9l7xpza/21.jpg?dl=0

You should remove the nudity from your pictures and ask a forum of 3d artists not a forum of makers of free games. I am not an artist, but your lights look wrong. Looks at photographs of women on the beach. No one looks like that. You need an environment light to remove the dark shadows. You need a fill-in light like a real photographer. The skins on some of your women look flat. Do you have enough SSS. Photographers never put lights below the face.

lee1400 wrote:Tried to send comics renderotica.com, here's the answer from them:

"Hi,
thank you for your interest in brokering for Renderotica. Unfortunately we are going to decline at this time. You need to strive to improve your lighting and posing ability before your comics will be ready for retail quality."

Tell me, what's wrong? Objectively they?
This is what I sent to them:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/04oxqfq22podfjf/1.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mmsfyt246dojmik/7.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/hr48ufbbnoi7kmy/16.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ttas04y8nva74kl/18.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/34euoy8j9l7xpza/21.jpg?dl=0

look at the last link the https://www.dropbox.com/s/34euoy8j9l7xpza/21.jpg?dl=0 . When did you see a person guy/girl look under something like that. It looks painfull.

LostTrout wrote:You should remove the nudity from your pictures and ask a forum of 3d artists not a forum of makers of free games. I am not an artist, but your lights look wrong. Looks at photographs of women on the beach. No one looks like that. You need an environment light to remove the dark shadows. You need a fill-in light like a real photographer. The skins on some of your women look flat. Do you have enough SSS. Photographers never put lights below the face.

Thank you. Tell me, please, your known forum 3d artists.

Skelaturi wrote:

lee1400 wrote:Tried to send comics renderotica.com, here's the answer from them:

"Hi,
thank you for your interest in brokering for Renderotica. Unfortunately we are going to decline at this time. You need to strive to improve your lighting and posing ability before your comics will be ready for retail quality."

Tell me, what's wrong? Objectively they?
This is what I sent to them:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/04oxqfq22podfjf/1.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mmsfyt246dojmik/7.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/hr48ufbbnoi7kmy/16.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ttas04y8nva74kl/18.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/34euoy8j9l7xpza/21.jpg?dl=0

look at the last link the https://www.dropbox.com/s/34euoy8j9l7xpza/21.jpg?dl=0 . When did you see a person guy/girl look under something like that. It looks painfull.

Thank you.
Other words, really bad?
I've seen a lot of comics that look, in my opinion, worse than me, but I want to achieve the perfect picture. I'm not an artist and photographer therefore I'm asking you to help.

deviantart has a group of 3d artists. http://dazclub.deviantart.com/ They would probably be willing to help you.

fleet wrote:deviantart has a group of 3d artists. http://dazclub.deviantart.com/ They would probably be willing to help you.

Thank you.