Um?
Has this been posted @: http://sharks-lagoon.fr/artworks/cugel/NNDF/start.html
in just the last day or two?
I've not seen comment, and at the moment I haven't time to investigate the offer. (Many apologies)

Thanks for pointing it out, Squeeky -- a nice job Cugel's done there, I must say! Excellent start to a series, I hope it will carry on in the same way.

By the way, Squeeky, how about editing a proper clickable link to it in your opening post?

Sorry about the link, omitted a space between the colon and http

Well! Greebo! I certainly would not have had the time to read through that as I staed earlier!

I agree with your comments about this. I feel that I must say that Cugel plays on emotions in a way that gives credibility for interactions between Walter and Consolata. He had me asking questions about the girl acquiring that affliction, her sexual background, and how their relationship could really be purposely explored any further.

Enough intrigue for my reader who I am sure will be also be impressed as both Greebo and myself.

Wow !!! it was truly great !!

I have see that Chapter 2 is out

I think i need a dream therapy^^ where was the clinic??
Hm, I believe If it give one day those DSI chambers then the humanity will extinct

It's a interesting story you tell us, Cugel, most of people wish such a chambers, 'Life your dream-dream your life'.....yep, i do it

I find it well written and the graphics is very good....only my load time is a little bit long.... maybe it is my translation program, because when i read it in original it is better

I am looking forward to the next part and I am curious how it goes further...sincerely a really really good work
( I wonder a little why you so little of it reads in this forum )

Another excellent chapter, Cugel -- thank you! I like the extended speech and narrative and the way there's more than one interleaved aspect of the story being told. Nice graphics too!

I look forward to the next chapter.

This is really well done, Cugel. Thank you.

Hi Cugel,

I just read the two episodes today: fantastic and crazy stuff!
Nice images and great story, I love it.

Thanks Cugel for your work and effort, very well done

The theme of dreams is interesting to tell many different stories. Let's see where Cugel's imagination will take us.

chapter 3 is online.

I found it by guessing what the URL was, but it's not actually linked to on the project page.

you're right
http://www.sharks-lagoon.fr/artworks/cu ... start.html

With due respect Shark, had M read this thread from the very top I have that very same link posted in my creation.

That's what I was referring to as the project page. When he first announced that chapter 3 was up it wasn't actually linked to there with the first two chapters.