Hi Fleet,

As I have in the topic - sexy girls - said. Not only the landscape, the people should change you. The story of Majorie ... super ...
well done. I think you have certainly very good stories that simply must be worked only graphically. Funny, I hang with these 'Girly' have found in many stories in the Lemma Soft forums.
It just looks funny. It botched the really good novel.

Josefus wrote:Hi Fleet,

As I have in the topic - sexy girls - said. Not only the landscape, the people should change you. The story of Majorie ... super ...
well done. I think you have certainly very good stories that simply must be worked only graphically. Funny, I hang with these 'Girly' have found in many stories in the Lemma Soft forums.
It just looks funny. It botched the really good novel.

I am glad you liked the story.
Very respectfully,
fleet

My next visual novel is being beta tested

fleet wrote:

David wrote:

fleet wrote:[size=150][color=#0040FF]EDIT: The game is ready for downloading. Here's the link to Wolflore (free registration is required).
http://wolflore.fliggerty.com/viewtopic.php?f=37&t=183

Just registered there. Now I just have to wait for approval from an Admin so I can download the game...

You should be able to access that area now.

I haven't gotten any feedback on the visual novel yet...

That's because I've only just downloaded the file.

If they had to have an admin approve me I'd have thought they would send an email to say so. Never received one, I've just gone there now after seeing your post.

Give me a day or two to have a look...

144 downloads, and no rude comments. Thank you!

Fleet, I respect your decision to limit your audience to people who are willing to sign up with Wolflore, but I want to make sure you realize the impact. The rapidshare link to "Getting to Know Christine" has had 7932 downloads. That doesn't count the mirrors or the people playing through PlayForceOne. If your goal is Wolflore users, you're doing the right thing. But if your goal is readers, I'll gently suggest that you could be doing much better.

Tlaero

Yeah, I gotta say, I would love to see your work, but I didn't want to sign up to another forum.

M

@tlaero and Mimalia,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. Membership at Wolflore has increased a lot since I linked Marjorie's Story.
EDIT: My next VN ("Detective Story") is ready for download at Wolflore. See topic viewtopic.php?f=11&t=2192.
Very respectfully,
fleet

nice novel

Umera Ahmed Novels

JFthunder1 wrote:nice novel

Thanks, Which one did you like, Marjorie's Story or Detective Story?

Marjorie's Story

Hotfile closed, so I've deleted the hotfile link.